Question
Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?
From the moment I met you
Answer
I want to first say that you have written a beautiful poem. brbrYou shouldnt ask for criticism, but ask for critiques!brbrI would like to type a few suggestions below, but feel free to disregard them, okay?brbrFor the second stanza, first line, you might want to say, quotIve loved you soquot and second line, quotthough you may have not knownquot...brbrI loved the belt and buckle phrase. DbrbrFor the last stanza, quotI want to love you morequot, second line, quotthan the first moment I met youquot.
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