Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?

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Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?
From the moment I met you

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I want to first say that you have written a beautiful poem. brbrYou shouldnt ask for criticism, but ask for critiques!brbrI would like to type a few suggestions below, but feel free to disregard them, okay?brbrFor the second stanza, first line, you might want to say, quotIve loved you soquot and second line, quotthough you may have not knownquot...brbrI loved the belt and buckle phrase. DbrbrFor the last stanza, quotI want to love you morequot, second line, quotthan the first moment I met youquot.

Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?

Question

Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?
From the moment I met you

Answer

I want to first say that you have written a beautiful poem. brbrYou shouldnt ask for criticism, but ask for critiques!brbrI would like to type a few suggestions below, but feel free to disregard them, okay?brbrFor the second stanza, first line, you might want to say, quotIve loved you soquot and second line, quotthough you may have not knownquot...brbrI loved the belt and buckle phrase. DbrbrFor the last stanza, quotI want to love you morequot, second line, quotthan the first moment I met youquot.

Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?

Question

Whatcha think of my poem? ANY CRITICISM PLEASE! ?
From the moment I met you

Answer

I want to first say that you have written a beautiful poem. brbrYou shouldnt ask for criticism, but ask for critiques!brbrI would like to type a few suggestions below, but feel free to disregard them, okay?brbrFor the second stanza, first line, you might want to say, quotIve loved you soquot and second line, quotthough you may have not knownquot...brbrI loved the belt and buckle phrase. DbrbrFor the last stanza, quotI want to love you morequot, second line, quotthan the first moment I met youquot.

Dose anyone believe in love at first site?

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Dose anyone believe in love at first site?
what dose love meen to you? if indeed you believe in love at all, finaly is it worth loosing if you met that one

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Yes, my husband of years and I fell for one another at first sight. It was a strange feeling of finding someone, of feeling completely comfortable with them even though we came from different cultures and spoke very little of each others language! Now Ive seen that in writing, it amazes even me! I thaought it happened to everyone back then, but now of course we know how lucky and blessed we were and are. I think its worth living the experience even if it ends in tears, but I hope it happens to you one day...and that it lasts forever!

Dose anyone believe in love at first site?

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Dose anyone believe in love at first site?
what dose love meen to you? if indeed you believe in love at all, finaly is it worth loosing if you met that one

Answer

Yes, my husband of years and I fell for one another at first sight. It was a strange feeling of finding someone, of feeling completely comfortable with them even though we came from different cultures and spoke very little of each others language! Now Ive seen that in writing, it amazes even me! I thaought it happened to everyone back then, but now of course we know how lucky and blessed we were and are. I think its worth living the experience even if it ends in tears, but I hope it happens to you one day...and that it lasts forever!